Premiere Contest WinnerThen and Now

Blinded to my goal,
Out of tune in my pursuit, 
I had meandered,
I had wandered.

I had an ingrained ability,
Building it for stability,  
I was holding the wrong piece, 
Dwelling on lees.

There was a depth,
I had not harnessed,
There was a cleft, 
I had not launched into it.

I walk with new eyes,
Still breaking through dawn's ice,
Hunting for balance,
Permuting my thoughts for clearance.

The scales have fallen off,
I journey through the terrain,
Undulating and rough,
Anticipating heaven's rain.



January 3, 2023.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Daniel Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 4:58 AM
This is a beautiful poem, Thompson, congratulations:)
Emate Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Thank you, Jo. I'm honoured.
George Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 4:11 AM
"I walk with new eyes, Still breaking through dawn's ice, Hunting for balance, Permuting my thoughts for clearance.". May your efforts crown fruit for balance and altered visions fall into your eyes. Beautiful poem. Congratulations Thompson on your trophy win!
Emate Avatar
January 4, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Thank you, Valsa. It's an honour.
Seeker Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 6:29 PM
Warmest congratulations on your trophy win, Thompson. Your words resonate deeply within. We can all contemplate and uplift our vibrations if we so choose. Thanks for sharing.
Emate Avatar
January 3, 2023 at 9:48 PM
Thank you, Seeker. It's an honour.
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