Then and Now

Then --

??With all firmness on the earth , 
    I  used my feet to walk 
    without fear and was reaching destination. .

    People used to listen to me. ??

Now--

??With all firmness of machine , 
    I am using the conveyer to make 
    my feet movable and with all fear 
    of fall in & out my feet is moving 
    and I am still in starting point. ..
    Not reaching the destination. ..

    People are not even  hearing to me...??

?Just learn to walk for  firmity     
    before jumping to running , 
    that leads to rigidity?

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 9/27/2018 2:58:00 PM

HelloDr. Virinch Mudumbal Acharva, you have written good advice in your poetry. Have a nice day my friend.

Dr Virinchi Mudumbai Acharya
Date: 9/27/2018 6:00:00 PM

Thanks a lot. Your compliments are blessings to enhance the writing spirit.