Them

What I love most about poetry is that a poet has the license to write poems about subjects
that are not necessarily the reflection of him. Case in point is the following poem. I was
inspired after reading the atheist author Christopher Hitchens book “god is not great”

They live in a spiritual universe
Where life is controlled from birth until death.
God and religion are somewhat perverse
Their morrows all dawn without any mirth.
The clergy worship tithing’s surrendered
Fleeced from the faithful flock each Sunday.
Sermons of dread are read to each member
Spreading the fear of forthcoming doomsday.
The young and elderly kneel on their knees
While a pretentious priest preaches his lies.
The fold mumbles prayers on rosary beads
In hopes of salvation when death arrives.
Poor souls! Lived their lives by the golden rule
To find out too late they’d all been such fools.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 28, 2010 at 7:56 PM
Some are born not to follow the "golden rule" of religion, this is not a sin... to them, or to others who believe in this way. A very insightful, and liberating point of view. Nice work, John.
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February 10, 2010 at 6:42 PM
really legitimate points that, in poetry, lost me. Tuning out now, sorry.
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October 16, 2009 at 11:13 AM
Deborah, Your comment left me scratching my head.
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October 16, 2009 at 9:34 AM
quite a percetive write! I've worried much over this subject. Try my God's Voice or God's Side Light & Love
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