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theistic silence of moonlight snow a stillness spawns & soothes laden boughs bent in silent submission &straining stems stanching streams silvery sheen on slippery slopes moonbeams shinning in rubellite dream &jewels of snow symphony in surging swells &slow yearning whispers wailing windsong aches & sacred silence of snow Written; January 10, 2023 Your Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Date: 1/12/2023 3:25:00 AM
I can feel this enigmatic silence of the snow. You have truly become an expert and exponent of this difficult open verse form. Congratulations dear friend on your first place win.
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Date: 1/11/2023 6:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/picture. I wish I was walking your beach. Have a blessed day................
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Date: 1/10/2023 1:05:00 PM
This is stunning and beautiful. A Fave for me :)
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Date: 1/10/2023 10:12:00 AM
You have become an expert in this form. I hear the heavenly silence you convey, my friend.
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