Brenda Chiri Poet Free verse

Their Warmth

You have an intense ineffable 
sparkle that glistens within your 
eyes
 Even the suns rays are jealous 
thinking it's their brightness that
gives you that twinkling brilliance 
They have even held me 
mesmerized with their splendor
Showing me that they ignite the 
very sun
holding a brightness 
with an intense heat it would 
burn others but me... 
it gives me comfort and holds 
me each day and night within
 their warmth

3rd place
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YOUR CHOICE (7),any form,any theme Poetry Contest

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Vijay Pandit June 12, 2019 at 3:26 PM WOW! So well written, Brenda..you shine in those eyes. Congrats on your win. Haven't seen much of your work lately. Brenda Chiri June 12, 2019 at 6:31 PM Vijay hey! Yes I had deleted my account like a month ago but found I could not stay away from p.s. ! Funny but it gave me a fresh start! Thanks so much for stopping by!;)

Paul Marc June 12, 2019 at 1:33 PM Like a beautiful smile :) Brenda Chiri June 12, 2019 at 6:32 PM Thank you yes a smile can be the same!;)

Emile Pinet June 12, 2019 at 1:22 PM Imaginative wizardry with the pen as you describe the virtues of such beautiful eyes...well done, Emile. Brenda Chiri June 12, 2019 at 1:29 PM Ah Emile thank you so very much! You are far too kind! ;)

John Gondolf June 12, 2019 at 1:20 PM These must be truly beautiful eyes, Bren, congrats on your win. John Brenda Chiri June 12, 2019 at 1:28 PM Lol John it is all wishful thinking and how I'd love to find eyes like that! Wow would be heaven! Thank you John for the read!;)

Gordon Mcconnell June 11, 2019 at 3:37 PM Real lively imagery Brenda, you have penned this so well encapturing the colour of these lines. Have a great day, Gordon Brenda Chiri June 11, 2019 at 5:49 PM Ah Gordon thank you so much! I so appreciate your stopping by!;)