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There they sat, together, the mother and daughter Reading the writes of many hopefuls, many poets With eyes widening, together they share the joy of words They share the joy of laughter, togetherness and love Together, the share of each other, a moment of perfection For no other moment could steal away such a pleasure As this morning brings two hearts closer forever

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/23/2008 7:20:00 PM
I guess I have no daughter to share my poetry with and neither my husband or sons have any interest in those special moments that words can bring. Thanks to all of you for reading my poems and giving me encouragement to keep on writing. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 10/23/2008 3:04:00 PM
It's amazing how words can bring people together. What a wonderful reflection. As my daughter and I share poetry, I can relate to the connection you speak of. The emotion comes through your words. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your ongoing encouragement. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 10/23/2008 10:11:00 AM
Dear Michael: Beautiful poem, welll written. Thanks for reading my poem. Glad you enjoyed it. LOve, Janice Herzog
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Date: 10/23/2008 8:54:00 AM
This is heartfelt with the love of both mother and daughter. Beautifully written. ~Carrie
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Date: 10/23/2008 7:26:00 AM
Michael this is such a wonderful poem. The relationship between a mother and daughter is something to behold. Michael thank you so very much for comments on my work. Greatly appreciated.
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