Their Eyes

Their Eyes
	
	
	Green-blanket-cape trailing behind  
	as he paces the corridor, 
	disconnection deep in his wild eyes, 
	no laces in his shoes.
	
	Her eyes are pain, 
	her path to presence is pain, 
	her retreat from presence almost complete, 
	wanting death as most want 
	food or love or sunlight.
	
	Handsome and articulate,
	he hand-signals across the room to no one 
	as his cold, dangerous eyes scan our faces, 
	calculating the possibilities for violence.
	
	Tattoos of tears, 
	three from each eye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Posey Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 7:01 PM
Jack, this cryptic entry is intriguing. I believe most can break the code and I'll leave it to others to gather the clues... I will say that volunteering in Prison Ministry tells me that one is reportedly letting his world know of six deaths.... Jake
Jordan Avatar
July 9, 2013 at 8:43 PM
I volunteer with a bipolar and depression support group. We visit two local mental hospitals each week to talk about the benefits of support groups, post-release. I've come to have a significantly broadened understanding of the depth and complexity of mental illness.
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July 3, 2013 at 10:51 PM
Jack, :-( thank you for everything, you're precious in every way, I am happy you are a part of the soup, and I can call you a friend. your words of comfort meant a lot. Love~ LInda
Lamoureux Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 7:21 AM
Disturbing and gripping. A masterful use of imagery.
Jordan Avatar
June 27, 2013 at 7:54 AM
Thanks for the comment, Richard... Jack
Andresen Avatar
June 16, 2013 at 7:07 AM
- Fear .... do not want to meet this person. - A clever poem and messages Jack! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 10:35 AM
Thanks, Anne-Lise.
Lawrence Avatar
June 13, 2013 at 2:05 AM
You sir are an image maker.
Jordan Avatar
June 23, 2013 at 10:36 AM
Thank you, that's a very kind comment.
Jones Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 4:59 PM
Now I won't sleep tonight!!!!! I hope you got this in lurking contest or whatever it was....awesome!!!!
Jordan Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 5:25 PM
I guess I missed the contest. I guess they are a little spooky, but I didn't intend that. Thanks for the nice comment... Jack
Onclaud Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 12:34 PM
gripping work, jack.. i am slain by the tenor of your poetic voice..likewise, congrats on all your recent wins!...;) huggs
Jordan Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 1:49 PM
Thank you, Nette. And thanks for the congrats... Jack
Hamilton Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 12:14 PM
scary write that draws one in Shadow x
Jordan Avatar
June 12, 2013 at 1:50 PM
They are scary folks, and very sad ones too. Thanks for reading, Shadow... Jack
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