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Their Cost

Vast is the valley of the forgotten. Trampled beneath the ground; lost All this life, here lies; cost

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/12/2009 11:12:00 PM
"All this life, here lies; cost" It would be a very graphic and morbid scene, but time has "trampled" it and covered it. The greenery grows from the blood and effort of those that fought and the wind carries their war cries. War is ugly.
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Date: 8/12/2009 4:48:00 PM
Short, but to the point, and well said!!
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Date: 8/12/2009 1:47:00 PM
Nicely written. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/12/2009 12:40:00 PM
Excellent poem Jessica>>James
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