The Zulu Coconut Speaks

The words of the Zulu coconut, a once coveted souvenir from an indulgent visit to festive Mardi Gras. As our hero speaks two mice nibble unobserved at his coat. "Beads were slung; doubloons cast. Grasping tourists seized the trifling throws. Floats advanced in the queue krewes tossed their tokens wildly. Prize gifts are meant to be given. So I, Zulu, went from hand to hand." Meanwhile a mischief of mice emerged to attack Zulu's varnished coat. As they quickly devour him, his paint began its work within their stomachs to do the same. Zulu's last witnessed speech: "Far better to restock the soil of earth. Better to be spent as nourishment to some. Better still to end this life by sprouting as a seed of hope. Better than this: "paint may be toxic."

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/13/2016 10:15:00 AM
Reason, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you so much for supporting my contest. Stop by my blog "LAST CALL" if you like. ((( note from MEakaPD Thank you ALL for waiting and chilling, while I sat on the sideline. Since March 1st, I moved to the 4th largest city in the USA (by population.) One of the hardest decisions EVER-EVER!!! I will keep short on my visits until April 1st. After that, there's no holding me back LOL -unless God has other plans. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/6/2013 9:30:00 AM
This is pleasant in my book.... Congrats Reason~A.O
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Date: 5/5/2013 5:52:00 PM
Reason, your poem was bad,, but not that bad.. I found meaning in it.. sorry you did not make the top 10...CONGRATULATIONS ;-) Thank you for participating in my worst poem contest. I don't know if I should call this an honor, but it has been something different... It's always a pleasure running odd contest. Take Care~ LINDA
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Date: 1/31/2015 7:03:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, I will take comfort for the lower placement in the fact that you found a redemption for the piece. Appreciate your contests always though I don't always enter.
Date: 2/1/2013 11:44:00 PM
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Date: 11/30/2012 7:37:00 AM
It appears you have exquisite control of your drunken pen.
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Date: 11/3/2012 10:33:00 PM
what a way to wield a drunken pen. And I see this scored high. Belated congratulations.
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Date: 10/20/2012 12:25:00 PM
Congrats Reason...What a form!!! One love. Joy Wells
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Date: 10/19/2012 9:25:00 PM
REASON, congratulations with your awesome win in the "Drunken Pen Round 2 " contest.....love the way you hold your pen. good night :-) xox PD
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Date: 10/19/2012 4:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Joann's "Drunken Pen" contest Reason. Love, Carol
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