The Zoo

On a hilltop not so far from Rhyl
Mother took us to the Zoo as Mothers will
The wind was strong and cold, the air was harsh
Although it was in August, not in March

Vultures  in enclosures   chained by leg
Like convicts in a prison   full of dread
When they vainly  tried to  get away
I felt their faith and hope dismayed

Who had chosen birds like these to show?
Even God himself would never know
Entertainment,sadism, power
Making people pay  and  children cower

When we got back  to the station I was sick
What cruel minds  played such a trick?
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Date: 8/5/2020 10:14:00 AM
Hello Katherine, I think that the vultures should never be zoo birds. they should roam free. Have a nice day my friend. hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 5/31/2021 11:07:00 AM
Hello katherine , they should not have been in the zoo. enjoy your day my friend.
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Katherine Braithwaite
Date: 10/12/2020 1:58:00 PM
I entirely agree.It was a cruel place
Date: 7/19/2020 2:02:00 PM
If you think you were sick, imagine how the zoo keepers feel cleaning up after vultures and carnivores every day! Aloha! Rico
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Katherine Braithwaite
Date: 10/12/2020 1:57:00 PM
But the birds should not be chained down in a Zoo
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