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The Zenith

Written: October 17, 2023
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breeze of zeal wheezed
the zephyr sings through the trees~
insight reach zenith

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Victor Buhagiar

October 18, 2023 at 2:03 AM

Incredibly lovely haiku. Your poetry reaches a high standard.

Ink Empress

October 17, 2023 at 11:16 PM

Absolutely stunning haiku! So seamless and creative how you’ve crafted this in such a smooth and soulfully divine flow. I always find the word zenith very artistic, and you’ve used it here so very well! In such a mellifluous rhythm, amazing how in few syllables you’ve managed to do that. Zephyr sings through the trees. Trees are inspiring and calming! Clever use of z words! Loved this