The Zenith

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Written: October 17, 2023 ____________________________ breeze of zeal wheezed the zephyr sings through the trees~ insight reach zenith

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Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 10/18/2023 3:03:00 PM

I'm impressed with how you used 'z's' so artfully and used onomatopoeia in describe the breeze of zeal. I've always liked the word 'zephyr' but rarely see it used so beautifully. The last line is quite powerful....insight reaching a zenith. I'm faving this Haiku! have a pleasant evening, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/18/2023 2:03:00 AM

Incredibly lovely haiku. Your poetry reaches a high standard.

Ink Empress

Date: 10/17/2023 11:16:00 PM

Absolutely stunning haiku! So seamless and creative how you’ve crafted this in such a smooth and soulfully divine flow. I always find the word zenith very artistic, and you’ve used it here so very well! In such a mellifluous rhythm, amazing how in few syllables you’ve managed to do that. Zephyr sings through the trees. Trees are inspiring and calming! Clever use of z words! Loved this

Paige Hind

Date: 10/17/2023 5:44:00 PM

I liked this. Especiially in the breeze... :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/17/2023 4:18:00 PM

I hear the song of the Zenith Sotto and I love it