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For    Isaiah Zerbst -Gordon Dunlop Leslie Contest
http://www.pasionporlapintura.com/art-gallery/george-dunlop-leslie-painter/leslie-gd-the-young-gardener-oil-painting-reproduction/

The Young Gardener

She is learning young
Pure genteel pleasures of a garden
Amid the fragrant roses and towering lupines
Sweet feminine echo of her beautiful mother
She holds up her watering can
A tiny version of the other.

Now she mimics to perfection
The sprinkling of flowers 
As she giggles with delight
At birds in secret bowers.

She can't wait for tomorrow
Her duties to employ
She is mother's little helper
And Daddy's little joy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Gauthier Avatar
May 27, 2021 at 11:12 AM
So sweet. Lovely, Suzanne ~
A  Avatar
July 7, 2013 at 1:03 PM
interesting one must say! Congrats ~SKAT~
Manassian Avatar
June 21, 2013 at 3:51 AM
Congrats, SuZ...what a peaceful and serene image this evokes. Lovely lines! :) Thanks for your visits to my work! I appreciate it! My Mama had a green thumb, but I have a good for nothing one! ;) Oh well....Have a great weekend!
Anglesey Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 6:30 PM
A beautiful poem and painting. Very lovely to read :)
Gildersleeve Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 4:26 PM
Congratulation, one of my favorites. Connie
May Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 4:06 PM
congrats on a fine win Suz
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 18, 2013 at 12:10 AM
Congratulations Suz just love this, well done xx
Zerbst Avatar
June 17, 2013 at 9:10 PM
Congratulations on your first place win! Well deserved, I must say. The wording is eloquent and well crafted, and the life of this poem is as bursting as the garden it contains! Added to that, I found it sweet and colourful. Thank you for entering this amazing poem.
Chircop Avatar
June 8, 2013 at 6:30 PM
a lovely post dear lady-Have a lovely weekend
May Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 7:56 PM
a wonderful write Suz.... it paints a pretty picture ....best wishes
De Burca Avatar
June 6, 2013 at 3:45 PM
Excellent, you have captured so much in your poem, a great depth of feeling. Its a 7 for me.
Ober Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 10:35 AM
Oh, wow! This poem is just bursting with gorgeous imagery. I like it even better than the painting! That last verse is SO sweet. Adding this one to my faves :)
Trifiatis Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Delightful choreography of nature, for the flowers and the people! A harmonious poem!
De La Croes Avatar
June 5, 2013 at 2:26 AM
You capture the atmosphere of the painting beautifully, Suz. I like it that you focus on the little girl, as I treasure that moments I can spend with my granddaughter with nature. Stay well, David
Hicks Avatar
June 4, 2013 at 11:33 PM
Perfection, Suzanne! I enjoyed this poem thoroughly even before seeing the painting that inspired it. I know it's cheesy to say (especially with this being a poetry site), but wow, do you have a way with words! Adding to favorites!
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