The Young Farmer

He plows his harrowed fields—visions grand!
Lushly, planned, large yeilds;
Bugs frantically seeking shields
As farmers plant the hayfields.

Ó November 15, 2011
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Cox Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 5:17 PM
I am not familiar with this form of poetry, but it was a familiar topic. Thanks for stirring up memories!
Dietrich Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 7:53 PM
this is so nice to read right around harvest time, Dane Ann.It's very good to see you on here posting again. Thanks for your note. Luv, Andrea
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November 17, 2011 at 11:24 AM
Thank you so very much for reading my poetry and taking time to leave your comment. I appreciate you more than you might imagine. I have really enjoyed these few days that I have had the opportunity to write and read some poetry here on the soup. It’s great to be able to do so and hopefully, it will continue. But…life is about to be hectic once again…soon. I send my love. Sincerely, Dane Ann
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November 15, 2011 at 7:47 PM
hello Dane Ann .. nice poem englyn form although I have to admit I am not familiar with it. I am however familiar with farming! and this brings back memories.However here in fl ...the reverse is true ..we seek shields fro the bugs in the gardens and fields! Thank you for the encouraging comment and good luck to you. God bless
Smith-Johnsen Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 11:34 PM
I know about Florida...and mosquitos! lol Near Live North Central by any chance?
Breidenthal Avatar
November 15, 2011 at 5:54 PM
Excellent poem! It created such a vivid picture in my mind. Wonderfully crafted englyn! Always, Laura
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November 17, 2011 at 11:32 AM
Thank you for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment.
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