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The You That Is You

I hold all of your secrets clenched every day,
Clenched tight and secure in my fist.
I play with them, tease them, throw them and read them,
And I flick them around with my wrist.

I know, every morning, you look deep through my eyes,
Telling me your cares about you.
And I search and I read and I store every second,
From happy to angry to blue.

But to you I’m cold, I’m flat, unemotional,
No soul, just empty in space.
And you don’t realize that there’s life in this screen,
Whenever I look at your face.

I’m your perfect reflection, your you that is you,
Your you when you’re standing up tall.
I’m your perfect everything that’s all that you are,
Your perfect long mirrored up wall.


5th September. hope you enjoyed this :)
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Arnone Avatar
September 6, 2016 at 3:29 PM
Mirrors often lie, and always show alternate sides -- they are also gateways to infinite parallel dimensions.... ;-)
Vaso Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 9:34 PM
I have always enjoyed and have a fascination with writings about mirrors! I think maybe from all the poetry and stories, this goes way back in time! Great write!
Grahamburglar Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 8:23 PM
Clever write, and it gives me an idea for a sort of 'through the looking glass' type of poem. Thanks for the interesting and inspiring poem. -G
Godwin Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 7:37 PM
The mirror even knows when you've been in the 2nd drawer! This, too, is very creative and a worthy read ... CayCay
Scars Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 6:42 PM
beautiful Lewis...:)-luloo
Raynes Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 6:46 PM
Thanks luloo
Pruitt Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 6:30 PM
I like 'the you that is you' Lewis...so stay the way that you are...enjoyed the poem very much
Raynes Avatar
September 4, 2016 at 6:45 PM
thanks Reta
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