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The You I Thought I Knew

you were amazing... everything I could possibly want you made everything feel right, my days were sunny and warm I remember feeling your breath as you slept on on my chest, holding you tight as we rode out the storm, I miss that you would come over just to be there, you were in love we would talk on the phone for hours, of course that didn't last but it was great... everything was great, we had so much fun we used to hold hands just sitting on the couch, I miss that too some days we would lay in bed all day, staring into each others eyes some nights you would steal all the covers, you looked so comfortable we talked about everything... good and bad, we worked it out. you were the best... I miss... I miss the you I thought I knew

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Date: 10/17/2012 5:10:00 PM
Sounds so realistic. I love it.
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Date: 8/31/2010 3:14:00 PM
Very emotional and well written..yay your good Mike come on write some more...Allie
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Date: 8/24/2010 9:43:00 PM
Very passionate feelings of love, mike
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Date: 8/24/2010 7:19:00 PM
very touching. Nice to see a guy write so soft and tenderly.
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Date: 8/24/2010 6:18:00 AM
sad...yet sounded good for awhile and romantic.
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