The Yellow Rose

*     Creator kissed, with a radiance, that comes from deep within
       Perfection caught so effortlessly, in the amber mood of day
       Petal by petal, she opens up, no shyness in her bloom
       A gilded queen, a gift of sun, she takes my breath away
       And though a rose is still a rose by any other name...
       All other roses would simply hide their blooming heads in shame


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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 7/19/2011 8:37:00 AM
woops! looked it up after the fact...my my it IS a word after all. : ) my lack of education preceeds me .congrats Carrie
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Date: 7/19/2011 8:34:00 AM
beautiful and ...petalic ..not a word but should be! congrats to you, Carrie
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Date: 7/13/2011 8:35:00 PM
So beautiful, Carrie. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN! Lainie
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Date: 7/13/2011 1:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Carrie. Nice going. xxxRalph
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Date: 7/13/2011 12:29:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on an excellent win for this soft and inspirational write luv..
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Date: 7/13/2011 11:51:00 AM
Your personification here is superb! Gratz! ~ECMc
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Date: 7/13/2011 9:09:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie for your win in the contest "A Poem You Like" sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2011 6:17:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on this wonderful write and win..luv Michael
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Date: 7/13/2011 1:28:00 AM
inspiring, dear carrie..special KUDOS to you for this superb win!...huggs
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Date: 6/3/2010 12:37:00 AM
Carrie, Howdy there neighbor, Golden roses ? Learn something everyday huh, great job with this - God Bless, YF4L, mj
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Date: 6/2/2010 9:05:00 PM
A wonderful entry. Good luck
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Date: 6/2/2010 8:33:00 PM
really dig the third line,, and by the way lol,... i just wanted to thank you for your comment it was lmfao hillarious,,, it made me laugh cause your comment was preety darn awsome. not crazy at all ... good luck on your contest entry
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Date: 6/2/2010 8:14:00 PM
this brings a smile to me!
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Date: 6/2/2010 7:23:00 PM
A very nice, fragrant write, Carrie. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 6/2/2010 6:38:00 PM
What a fragrant write about our beautiful friend the rose. Must have been a joy to find the perfect flower. Excellent piece.
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