Carrie Richards Poet Rhyme

The Yellow Rose

*     Creator kissed, with a radiance, that comes from deep within
       Perfection caught so effortlessly, in the amber mood of day
       Petal by petal, she opens up, no shyness in her bloom
       A gilded queen, a gift of sun, she takes my breath away
       And though a rose is still a rose by any other name...
       All other roses would simply hide their blooming heads in shame


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Robert A. Dufresne July 19, 2011 at 8:37 AM woops! looked it up after the fact...my my it IS a word after all. : ) my lack of education preceeds me .congrats Carrie

Robert A. Dufresne July 19, 2011 at 8:34 AM beautiful and ...petalic ..not a word but should be! congrats to you, Carrie

Elaine George July 13, 2011 at 8:35 PM So beautiful, Carrie. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN! Lainie

Ralph Taylor July 13, 2011 at 1:23 PM Congrats on your win, Carrie. Nice going. xxxRalph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 13, 2011 at 12:29 PM Congrats Carrie on an excellent win for this soft and inspirational write luv..

Edward Mccormick July 13, 2011 at 11:51 AM Your personification here is superb! Gratz! ~ECMc

Carol Sunshine Brown July 13, 2011 at 9:09 AM Congratulations Carrie for your win in the contest "A Poem You Like" sponsored by Brian Strand. Love, Carol

Michael J. Falotico July 13, 2011 at 6:17 AM Congrats Carrie on this wonderful write and win..luv Michael

Nette Onclaud July 13, 2011 at 1:28 AM inspiring, dear carrie..special KUDOS to you for this superb win!...huggs

Michael Jordan June 3, 2010 at 12:37 AM Carrie, Howdy there neighbor, Golden roses ? Learn something everyday huh, great job with this - God Bless, YF4L, mj

Dr.Ram Mehta June 2, 2010 at 9:05 PM A wonderful entry. Good luck

Poet Destroyer A June 2, 2010 at 8:33 PM really dig the third line,, and by the way lol,... i just wanted to thank you for your comment it was lmfao hillarious,,, it made me laugh cause your comment was preety darn awsome. not crazy at all ... good luck on your contest entry

David Byrne June 2, 2010 at 8:14 PM this brings a smile to me!

Caroline Cécile Delacroix June 2, 2010 at 7:23 PM A very nice, fragrant write, Carrie. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Anthony Nutter June 2, 2010 at 6:38 PM What a fragrant write about our beautiful friend the rose. Must have been a joy to find the perfect flower. Excellent piece.