The Yearning Daydream

When I stare off into space
I think of a place
Where we could be together

We would ride on the stars
Instead of skipping bars
Escaping the evil eyes

The world wouldn’t judge
When I give your nose a nudge
With mine

We’d be alone with the sun
Creating our own endless fun
Together

There would be no more prayer
We could be us without a care
Or hateful remark

In my private universe 
We’d be together until the hearse
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020


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Date: 10/5/2020 3:35:00 PM
Such a delightful read Caleb I enjoyed it so much and many congrats on your 2nd place win. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Date: 10/4/2020 3:31:00 PM
A cute poem, Caleb. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Huge Congratulations on your Top Win!
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Date: 10/4/2020 1:31:00 PM
Wonderful write Caleb. Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/4/2020 7:50:00 AM
I really love the sentiment shared by many who have to endure so much just to be with their love. Congrats on your top win.
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Caleb Girard
Date: 10/4/2020 10:12:00 AM
Thank you so much! I just hope that this poem can inspire change in some people.
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