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The Yacht

Protruding pole in the middle The top look like a keel that light During the night in the midst of the bay Your like a swan in the day time heralding Its huge but gentle to look at its rarity Seldom ordinary people has own you White Now I see you move in smooth sailing With girls and gents wearing sunglasses The point of your richness and affluency All eyes looking as you passed by with hope That one day each has dock you in their dream You swarm the sea with pride and with brevity Careful pilot not to trouble the waves with rage Because you're precious, rare but with worth It's like a love that only longing for comfort A pleasure, an adventure to the sea of life.

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Date: 5/1/2025 8:21:00 AM
nice metaphor poet, sometimes it is hard, no money, no yacht, ( my opinion) well written poet
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Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 5/1/2025 3:44:00 PM
You have a very sharp understanding with this poem, very subtle and deep analysis. Yacht symbolizes pride and affluency of a person. If a person own a yacht it means you belong in the top echelon family, an elite, famous, a celebrity or belong to a society of financially rich. I really appreciate your nice comment, Yann. Thank you.

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