The Wrong Love Story

I cracked my own heart by being with you,
but you're the one who broke it in two.
Everything was so perfect, we clicked so well,
then as time went on I was cursed with a spell.
It showed me everything I didn't want to see,
it showed the real you and that hurt me.

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You were so perfect and so very sweet,
but you were only showing a first page peek.
You had lots of flaws but I couldn't tell,
you came off as perfect and hid them so well.

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As the chapters went on, I started uncovering the real you,
it hurt my eyes and made me feel blue.
Your words were so sweet,
they came and swept me off my feet.

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But after 3 months that sweet completely went away,
you said I meant the world to you but you left me astray.
This is a love story that shouldn't be shown to the world,
because it would break the heart of every single girl.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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April 11, 2012 at 8:28 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful poems...Patrick
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April 8, 2012 at 9:09 PM
Very very good..my friend and i enjoyed reading your poem..well spoken!!
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April 8, 2012 at 9:08 PM
Very very good..my friend and i enjoyed reading your poem..well spoken!!
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April 8, 2012 at 7:38 AM
Nicely done - how we pine when our heart gets broken. See 2 typos - I cracked my own heart by being with you, but YOU’RE [your] the one who broke it in two. AND But after 3 months that sweet completely went away, you said I MEANT [ment] the world to you but you left me astray. gloryia
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April 8, 2012 at 7:22 AM
Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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April 8, 2012 at 7:22 AM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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April 8, 2012 at 7:21 AM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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April 8, 2012 at 7:21 AM
Cute one..Enjoyed reading this morn..Sara
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April 8, 2012 at 7:20 AM
Enjoyed reading your work..It is so amazing how there is music all around us without having manmade vehicles playing all the time...Sara
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April 8, 2012 at 7:19 AM
A heartbreaker, we call him. Touching and very well written Shaina. - oxox Anne-Lise
Kendrick Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 7:16 AM
Interesting approach to love gone bad..I hope just a write and not your life..Sara
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