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The Wright Stuff

"The road to write is paved with good intensives."
— attr. too know won

The mourning it always do come sum-how
where they're voices brake the piece into peaces—
we was all of us promised a wright to no the truth
butt the heir we breathe has went, spent, mined out, beyond the vane/vain gnus
proscribed like a wether we cannot sea—the err of it and yeti.

Running from the lie's the money stayed, still
He, galled, gulled, lead in, shuttered—should of ironed the flood on thin eyes, thin i's
they swept the e-rupture under the rug of the volcano
lent, bent, the routes of it t'all drowned the ceiling every moan and mown
knot one sole voice cud of broke the rein of time it-shelf.

The children play was born into wore there bodies the pour of plague
sum-body never said nothing—the reign felled on the pane/pain like whether
emigrate, immigrate or stay, him and her and them bear/bare the same old hole
they're writes they're breastless rites to exst was pored over the alter
and the sole of it, the soul of it, they burned the maid in the mourning stair.

And now, , we scroll and sprawl and drool through the mourning of taht
sum-how the "famine" is a cantent, the "worn" is a wra, the "wand" is a wrte
end sum-one's always loosing there wright two exist, here, hear, their
too nations, to flags, two many wounds the power they powder the flood they could of ironed
where we're board-stiff wore down, the fowl foul heir of sit, the steal they steel—
the raised cities rased, razed—

interesting, someone didn't run Grammarly,

rite.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Maverick Avatar
April 14, 2026 at 10:30 PM
In a summery..Of your gramming Daniel..I see you have done sum? Cramming.' Ramming at the whorls Of the 'ceeep-state?' Or its out-liars Any-way you choose, the intention Is we loose.' Why not loose a quarrell Or more.? Maybe even up the score.?
Crandall Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 7:06 PM
Hi Daniel, once again, it seems you're using a part of your brain that most of us rarely use in this dense homonymous poem. The mourning it always do come sum-how, indeed!
Winter Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 7:38 AM
Dearest Daniel, there is so much sorrow in this world, the descriptions of this world in your poem is absolutely accurate. So much pain, injustice and chaos but yet we live and yet we hope for better. Sometimes I wonder if humans were only made for feeling and living but yet they created so much unnecessary chaos. With love and respect always, Anne
Rodgers Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 9:18 AM
Dearest Anne, I love reading your note and deeper thoughts. I now see your thoughts are progressing in philosophy, psychology, and human rights. All this will make you a Berean, which is someone who looks for the truth to make sure it is solid. Thank You, Blessings, Daniel
Buhagiar Avatar
April 8, 2026 at 2:05 AM
You use intentional misspellings and homophones. A mirror a world where communication is breaking down. This world is a chaos and you describe it to perfection.
Rodgers Avatar
April 10, 2026 at 9:15 AM
Hello Victor, this one took a lot of thinking revising, rewriting, rewording, my thought was dialectical speak where two things in opposition are true at the same time, double speak. Thank you for your visit and note. Blessings, Daniel
Anaya Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 9:04 PM
I'm not sure, but "Of Mice And Men" comes to mind. That and some Instagramers comments (lol). I spotted a Banksy graffiti in the image, very interesting, Daniel. April blessings!
Rodgers Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 11:17 AM
Dear Anaya, you are seeing my philosophical self digging deep into us as humans and how shifting language, culture, socio-political, environments are changing how we perceive our world, environment, culture, our humanness or lack of. I am always happy to see your smiling posts. Blessings, Daniel
Goldsmith Avatar
April 6, 2026 at 1:35 PM
"The Wright Stuff" is a creative write/picture. Love Both... Have a blessed day writing away as you enjoy life................
Rodgers Avatar
April 7, 2026 at 11:11 AM
Dear Paula, thank you so much my friend and love reading your notes. Blessings, Daniel
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