The Worth of Rice

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The Worth of Rice

Food is a daily need. 
Some eat well, are fed well, 
are taken care of, 
while others have little, 
or none. 

It is what we do with what we have, 
that is the difference between, 
living and living well. 
The quality of life, 
ever the goal to be higher...
than expected of, 
or made to.
To have a price, 
un-payable... 
except by Him, 
who had no need of money, 
and yet was betrayed for silver.
The sad seller in the transaction, 
hanged in the bargain, 
to live forever among "them", 
in the dark.  
 
Sacrifices have a thousand faces, 
from time spent to cash lost. 
Blood given, missed moments, 
and abuse. 
Loss, and grief, the brothers of regret, 
in the end the mirror of our lives, 
everything that was bought and sold, 
that made a difference, 
between the line of gray...
and the deep of black.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 1/7/2020 10:07:00 AM
i have had little and still found some to give... this is deep and powerful my friend... wow... excellent write Ann... hugs
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Date: 1/7/2020 10:09:00 AM
Ever as I was writing, you showed up above.. like a beam from heaven came by through the clouds and flew back off.. Ty for your kind words today... God give you flowers and birds that sing.. Ann Note the time stamps... lol
Date: 1/7/2020 9:47:00 AM
well done as usual. Great work, Julie
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Ann Foster
Date: 1/7/2020 10:08:00 AM
Blushing at the "as usual" comment. Ty my friend. Happy Decade to you and God give you special blessings this year, unexpected and needed most. Ann
Date: 1/6/2020 10:09:00 PM
Wow! This is quite profound, Ann. It's a FAVE for me, and that's even though I'm at odds with 25% of what you penned. Shows you what an incredibly deep, poetic write this is! Bravo! Best always, Gershon
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Ann Foster
Date: 1/7/2020 10:07:00 AM
My heart is lifted that you have found worth in these words at all. Thank you my friend. God Bless your days... Ann
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