The Worlds Flamboyant Creations

Realizing reality is relative I 
remembered,
Déjà vu yet still I quickly 
disengage,
My remaining remnants of 
righteousness rendered.
Auto pilot seemingly protective 
as they re-enslave,

Us..and they as the media-my 
meditation is static,
Addictive is this world- thus my 
addictions predicament 
Society never thought white 
lies would be so problematic..
Now currently the problems 
erode our freedoms into 
imprisonment. 

Prisoners how do you do!?
Imprisoned by greedy people 
that lack character at very 
least, 
You all should feel so stupid 
and that feeling is past due,
But there I go acting like one of 
the weak.

You don't see the picture, the 
one painted or otherwise,
Under skies of pollution 
trapped in our atmosphere..
Our society could never truly 
feel the pull of the moon or our 
humble tides,
Human life too flamboyant to 
coexist under our stratosphere.

The Worlds Flamboyant 
Creations.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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June 9, 2014 at 4:09 PM
you are welcome...
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June 9, 2014 at 7:47 AM
Montego, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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June 9, 2014 at 12:28 PM
Thank you Linda The Great.
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June 9, 2014 at 6:15 AM
A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, Montego
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May 29, 2014 at 3:16 PM
You are a new poet Montego, and I love the word flamboyant, it's like hitting me with the same emotions over and over...... Of course I enjoyed this...thank you for commenting my comment... You can call me Linda, or PD...
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May 29, 2014 at 12:55 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Montego :) - I choose your first lovely written poem - Well done !! - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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May 29, 2014 at 2:44 PM
I appreciate your welcome and I also will return the favor. Words are my life an I love to share them with others
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May 28, 2014 at 6:44 PM
Montego, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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May 29, 2014 at 2:47 PM
I have to start the with a laugh out loud and say thank you so much for your time and open arms, I didn't think anyone would even notice this. I work a lot but I will do this same favor for you Skat. Haha
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May 28, 2014 at 5:45 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Montego. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.
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May 28, 2014 at 7:47 AM
A lovely poem Welcome to poetry soup
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May 28, 2014 at 7:16 AM
Montego, wow...This is pure awesome. A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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May 29, 2014 at 2:49 PM
For The Poet Destroyer to say that to me is amazing, my work "amazing"? Stop it. I put my heart in it though. I'll check out your contest but in better at letting it "flow", if you will. Thank you Linda
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