The World I See

The morning sun rolls around
Here, like Tick Tock's on a clock
Even the current of the sea is flowing

Wallowing seagulls in there flock
Only the sea breezes have ever seen
Revealing, the sun begins to rise
Laying upon a sight every one should see
Dynamic rays of shine and Beautiful zodiacal lights

In the Clouds where birds view from the sky heights

Soon I wish to see with my own undying eyes
Endless Beauty and essence
Enchanting Love and harmony highs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Devonshire Avatar
August 7, 2009 at 7:40 PM
Having spent some time on the beach recently, I believe you have captured beautifully the sights and enchantment the ocean provides. Very nice wor, Cody! Love, Carolyn
Brown Avatar
July 28, 2009 at 11:52 AM
Cody, it was my pleasure to read your excellent piece of poetry today. I love acrostic form. Love, Carol
Burton Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 5:15 PM
Well that was wonderful and peaceful. The nature seems to ooe right out of the poem. The ocean and all its nature and beauty. I sound like a woman huh? I am a man who loves the earth for what it is... you have explained it very well. Thank you for the read, enjoy your evening!
Doggett Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 3:01 PM
Interesting acrostic, great imaginatio, Bill
Guzzi Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 12:12 PM
interesting..."my own undying eyes" Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
July 27, 2009 at 7:47 AM
Interesting descriptive piece. Sara
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