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The World Ahead

THE WORLD AHEAD One goes everywhere, One sees everything, But the cosiness of ones’ nest, Is everywhere unseen. Laughter and smile are still there, But the hand of concern is nowhere. I miss those days at home, When the heart wanted to roam, But now, when it has got the escape, Then why am I not happy with the self chosen space? The scolding of mom and the rebuke of dad, Once a norm and now a sad song. But life is what you make it, So keeping all the personal attachments at stake, Though my heart still wants to return to its nest, To have a comfortable rest, Yet life starts out of your comfort zone, So move ahead and make yourself outshone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/7/2016 12:47:00 PM
Hi Tanya, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 9/3/2016 8:50:00 PM
Tanya, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT
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Tanya Yadav
Date: 9/4/2016 12:07:00 PM
HY SKAT. THANKS for the welcome.

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