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everyones world is different in that we each have our own world each of us has a destiny thats tied to if we are a boy or a girl we all have desires the rich and the poor it's not always money the thing that we wish for some look for love when it's so hard to find it's just one thing but it stays on our mind some of us search for knowledge the keys to unknown doors searching religion to find them though few find what they're looking for life is a journey we take from young to old and all along this journey certian mysteries unfold mysteries and histories mingle in our mind puzzle pieces come together but not all the time failure and death travel side by side ever always near us we try so hard to hide secrets and ignorance always plague our lives the things that we don't know become a horrible surprise our friends and our enemies each inflict their harm they may hurt our bodies but it's worse when they hurt our heart and God where is God while we stand here alone would'nt it be nice if we could reach him by the phone courage and strength foolishly risk the one and only life we have and the fact is there can be no happy without there being a sad there are also surprises that make us glad success takes persistance and that's an ammount we have to get up not stay down for the count God is out there listening and this is hard to believe helping you find your victory with forces hard but not impossible to see (to be continued)

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Date: 11/20/2013 7:54:00 PM
Very nice! A good heartfelt write. Keep on writing...
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Date: 11/16/2013 11:35:00 PM
I know my world is different... however, i enjoy the way you expressed the proper perception, of happiness and sadness... you can't have one without the other... when both are born from the same energy... great ending... Now, i wish to live by that line this week.. always~ LINDA
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Date: 11/15/2013 6:15:00 PM
Deep philosophical insight... Terry (& thanks for your kind comments... and also, you are right: "it's not right, it's not right, it's not right..."
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Date: 11/12/2013 4:53:00 AM
Sometimes in life it is hard to see and understand that God is there in events that happens here on earth but He is there..Enjoyed reading your work this morning..Thanks for the visit to my page..Only one time so far has a line stayed with me from a night dream but that line was a great won and produced a great poem but now I can't remember what poem came from that line..Ha!! Ha!! Senior moment..Sara
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