Home » Poems » Honesty Oimbo » The World

The World

the world is  a child playing with a balloon on thorns

lifefree verse

♡Like0

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Oimbo Denis

September 5, 2018 at 8:08 PM

So u want to describe the world in one sentence.... Do u really believe that... Even my critic is more than a sentence...

Daver Austin

November 2, 2010 at 3:43 PM

Brief. This is a good quality. You really have something to say. Refreshing. Love, Dave

De R

November 2, 2010 at 9:08 AM

This is a very interesting statement. Such simple words, but a deep meaning. Loved this, Honesty! Emilia:)

Michael J. Falotico

November 2, 2010 at 9:04 AM

So true!!!!! and the goal is don't pop the dreams...thanks for our kind comments...Michael

Fabiyas M V

November 2, 2010 at 8:32 AM

friend,just one line but it contains a thousand thoughts.fine.fabiyas

Carolyn Devonshire

November 2, 2010 at 5:49 AM

What an interesting observation, Honesty. There are many times when I would agree with this! Thanks for stopping by and reading my poem "New Deal." I chose "headline couplets" because the first line of each verse reads as a headline, but I like your suggestion as well! Best wishes, Carolyn