David Scott Poet Rhyme

ThE WoRkS

Though there's a change in Circes
      Still the same whenever we unify
    With exchanged smiles and smirks
     It would seem between her and l
  
     With all the uncontrollable quirks
     Emotions are on an all time high
     With the constant tugs and jerks
     Feelings niether of us can dine
     
     The image of her whenever it lurks
     Captured through the minds eye
     That feeling when all the fireworks
     And supernova's begin filling the sky

     
     
    

An extension of poem so sweet

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Nancy Kaufman March 25, 2023 at 6:08 PM I forget what this rhyme scheme is called but this is a wonderful descriptive write. Enjoyed it. Nancy David Scott July 18, 2023 at 10:10 AM did want to rework this like others think the form is called abab im told i have at least another 58 in this pattern i wrote over last three years pandemic keeping head bizzy taking bits from old writes extending on those bits

Laura Breidenthal December 6, 2022 at 12:33 PM Love this gorgeous piece. Sounds like a magnetic connection. Those last lines are so beautiful! Amazing work, David! Always, Laura David Scott March 2, 2023 at 9:57 AM not been on here for a while want to update this peace reedit bit like others got a whole barrage of poems need reworking just so much going on at moment feeling connected that would be nice only ever experienced once thankyou are for kind words xx

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 12, 2022 at 9:50 PM I love the beautiful imagery of this terrific poem. So electrifying! :) Evelyn Judy Buehler February 13, 2022 at 3:42 PM You are quite welcome. It's great to have you back on the soup. I think you have done very well with this poem. The entire poem has got to be amazing! xx David Scott February 13, 2022 at 11:57 AM Thank you for your kindness and words not been on soup for while not as often as used to be l was trying to be more poetic but create a picture of these feelings emotions like lve done with a few others this was only one verse from an old poem called sensual enjoyments just tryed to add too xx