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The words unspoken

I remained quiet - he heard everything.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 10/10/2019 11:32:00 PM
SILENCE- THERE IS EVERYTHING!
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Date: 9/28/2019 5:02:00 PM
This is great. Silence conveys a powerful message.
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Date: 9/10/2019 12:50:00 PM
Yes...when a woman wants to pass on a message, she needs not talk; silence talks louder than words! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 8/29/2019 4:54:00 AM
So much said in so few words. Perfect Monoku.
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Date: 8/27/2019 9:38:00 AM
Whoa! that's simply amazing! well done! :)
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Date: 8/26/2019 7:15:00 AM
Great one Swetha :)
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 8/26/2019 11:25:00 AM
Tqq Heidi :)
Date: 8/22/2019 6:21:00 AM
A lot of thought has gone into this. Made me think. A Monoku to reflect on Swetha....Maria Hugs
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 8/26/2019 11:23:00 AM
TQ so much Maria :)
Date: 8/21/2019 9:34:00 AM
This should be poem of the day.
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Date: 8/26/2019 11:32:00 AM
Thanks for the compliment Richard. Your comment is worth a POTD.. thanks a ton :)
Date: 8/21/2019 7:44:00 AM
I absolutely love this Swetha. Our thoughts are deeds. Excellent! xxoo
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Date: 8/26/2019 11:33:00 AM
Thank you so much Connie :)
Date: 8/20/2019 1:00:00 PM
Yes, Swetha, it is sometimes the spaces between what we say that tell all. // Barry.
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Date: 8/26/2019 11:34:00 AM
You're right Barry :) thanks a lot :)
Date: 8/20/2019 11:31:00 AM
This Monoku say all that was necessary! penned cleverly. Hugs Jennifer.
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 8/26/2019 11:34:00 AM
Thanks a lot Jennifer :)
Date: 8/20/2019 4:13:00 AM
- He knows your feelings ... great written, Swetha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/26/2019 11:35:00 AM
He truly does dear :) tqq so much :)
Date: 8/19/2019 3:16:00 PM
wow, DEEP and saying so much with so few words.
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Date: 8/26/2019 11:36:00 AM
Thanks a lot Andrea :)
Date: 8/18/2019 11:20:00 AM
Devastatingly wicked one, Swetha. Love it! A FAVE for me. Best wishes, Gershon
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Swetha Vangaveti
Date: 8/26/2019 11:36:00 AM
Wow!! Thanks a lot Gershon :)
Date: 8/18/2019 1:47:00 AM
Hmm, a mystery, Swetha. Did you want him to hear? In which case, what a man! Did you not? In which case, this feels sinister. I like the ambiguity :-)
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Date: 8/18/2019 9:12:00 AM
Lol!! The first one Nina :D