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I sat under the heavens As I counted every star My mind among moonbeams Shining upon all my scars How they lifted up my spirit Thoughts of you and I tonight Floating on those moonbeams Engulfed within their light Angels began stroking lyres Beautiful music they made A song that was for you and I stardust soon began to cascade That's when starlight began to sing A melody that twinkled up above A song that sang of feelings The words spoke of true love
1/30/2020

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Date: 2/7/2020 11:53:00 AM
This poem is so melodious Brenda, it could very well be your song. A beautiful poem, well penned my friend. Congrats on your deserved win. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/9/2020 4:21:00 AM
Thank you Jennifer do very much!;)
Date: 2/2/2020 2:10:00 PM
This is an instant FAVE, Brenda! So sweet, romantic and stirring. Super! Cheers, Gershon
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 2/4/2020 1:49:00 AM
Thank you Gershon! I love when you comment!;)
Date: 1/31/2020 7:30:00 PM
Congratulations on your win :)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/31/2020 7:56:00 PM
Thank you sandy so muvh!;)
Date: 1/31/2020 1:48:00 AM
Very beautiful poem Brenda, the answer to your question is YES1!!!!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/31/2020 12:32:00 PM
Why thank you Art! And your comment and answer to my question was quite nice !;)
Date: 1/30/2020 10:59:00 PM
Brenda, your poem is utterly beautiful, and reading it is a joyful experience!
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2020 11:13:00 PM
Evelyn thank you so much!;)
Date: 1/30/2020 7:52:00 PM
"A comment has not been posted". Well we will soon put that right! A truly lovely little poem, Poetess...warmed me up no end this cold night. Delightful! In much affection. :) john
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 1/30/2020 11:13:00 PM
Ah thank you John! You really are too kind to me! All my affection!;)

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