El Sid Poet ABC

The Words I Wanted To Say

The day I got you the day I got the world,

The day you left me the day I left the world,

Stars glittered in the evening of winters,
 
The shine of them makes me cried,

Winds whispered with the darkness of night,

By see the glimmer of you I smiled,

With the shadow of you I tied,

The words you said I revised,

To see a glimpse of you I'm blind,
                             
A glee of your voice is a peace of mine,

From the light of you I inspired,

To touch your soul I desired,

To see a blossom of you I'm alive,

The day I got you the day I got the world,

The day you left me the day I left the world.

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Skat A January 23, 2016 at 9:35 PM EL SID:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~ El Sid January 24, 2016 at 5:45 AM thankyou :)

Poet Destroyer A January 8, 2016 at 10:42 PM El Sid, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@ El Sid January 14, 2016 at 3:27 AM I'm happy to here :)

Skat A January 8, 2016 at 1:57 PM So Sid ,,,,, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT El Sid January 14, 2016 at 3:29 AM hello ... :)