The Wooden Swing Set

Quiet and still now.
The swing occasionally catches the air.
The tire never moves. 
There’s no one there to care.
The jungle gym beside it is played with by squirrels.
The sand box below holds creatures quiet and shy.
Tiny plastic men are lost in the sand deep below.
A metal car is with them, once favorite of them all.
Leaves stir in the clubhouse, with spiders in its loft.
My son hadn’t played with it for a long, long while.
But I hadn’t noticed while he was here running in the house.
And now when I see the Wooden Swing Set…
It’s connects with my empty heart.



A touch of Empty Nest Syndrome brought this poem to me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Fisher Avatar
September 28, 2015 at 11:45 AM
A sweet poem about the sadness of children growing up and moving on. Love Janette
Prior Avatar
November 21, 2014 at 6:26 PM
A wonderful heartfelt poem Carol, I felt the loneliness throughout. The abandoned chair was a fine image for the brain.
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June 23, 2014 at 7:39 AM
Very beautiful poem about days gone by. Thank God for memories. Although they are sad they also bring back the joy of those times.... Very well crafted, Carol.... Robert.
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June 23, 2013 at 4:36 AM
Carol, Congratulations on a winning entry. I am saddened by your poem, but I suppose that was the purpose of all entries in this contest. I suffer your pain in remembering what used to be.... I pray comfort will find you.... Hugs..... Jake
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June 22, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Carol. Thank you very much :-) Congratulations on your wonderful win~ LOVE~ SKAT.
Kendrick Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 5:05 PM
Very expressive of the that feeling..Congrats on being honor in Andrea's favs...Sara
May Avatar
April 22, 2013 at 4:12 PM
great write and win Carol...congrats
Hicks Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 6:07 PM
This was so heartbreakingly sad Carol! It reminded me of how I feel while watching Toy Story 3 (especially the ending). When you're feeling sad and nostalgic just remember... that's why there's grandchildren! Definitely a worthy win!
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April 20, 2013 at 4:10 PM
Congrats on your win!
Jones Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 7:05 AM
Very familiar scene to many....great poem..congratulations
A   Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 9:36 PM
Carol, Congratulations IN HONOR OF Andrea's favorite POEM contest. *Always & Forever' @->- LINDA -<-@
A  Avatar
April 19, 2013 at 8:30 PM
Carol, a sweet win~*~SKAT
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April 19, 2013 at 8:05 PM
Shame, Carol. I know exactly where you were when you wrote this. Both my children, a set of pigeon twins, have not only left home but they're living in two different countries and I'm on my ownsome back home. Awesome write and a well-deserved win in Andrea's "fave poem" contest. :)
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April 19, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Many congrats my dear friend Carol! This is indeed great and amazing ! I love it & so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing! I'm so touched with this awesome poem of yours. Have a grace-filled day! Love and hugs, Leonora
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March 23, 2013 at 8:16 PM
this is so touching. I love it. Congrats for your win. gotta fave this one!
A   Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 5:20 PM
Carol, :-) Congratulations ~ Thanks for supporting my "descriptive poem" contest. Always yours truly* Linda
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June 28, 2011 at 5:29 PM
this was awesome i loved my swing set.cory
Brown Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 10:10 AM
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poetry with us today Carol. It was a pleasure to read. Have a wonderful inspiration filled day my friend. Love, Carol
Cooper Avatar
June 28, 2011 at 8:17 AM
lovely verse you have artfully penned
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