The Wooden Bridge

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We walked to the ridge; A sinking feeling of sadness, The wooden bridge was down, Absolutely nothing, we could do, Nodding in agreement we left. 7/12/2024 Photo 5

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Chantelle Cooke

Date: 7/23/2024 12:25:00 AM

Hello Eve! Spectacular poem. Lovely imagery. Congratulations on your win.Blessings Chantelle

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2024 9:00:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Have a great day writing away...................

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2024 5:53:00 AM

Congrats on your win Eve, Very nicely penned

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 7/16/2024 2:28:00 PM

Dear Eve, This gives such a strong visual, even for me with out it's picture. Congratulations on your win. Well done!! Blessings to you..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/16/2024 8:48:00 AM

I like the way you went with the picture as your inspiration. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Valsa George

Date: 7/14/2024 8:55:00 PM

The wooden bridge on the verge of collapse gives a sick feeling. No body will dare to climb on it to reach the other end. Well written, dear Eve. All the Best.