The Wooden Bridge

We walked to the ridge; 
A sinking feeling of sadness, 
The wooden bridge was down,
Absolutely nothing, we could do,
Nodding in agreement we left.

7/12/2024

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Paula Goldsmith

July 18, 2024 at 9:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story again. Have a great day writing away...................

Joseph May

July 18, 2024 at 5:53 AM

Congrats on your win Eve, Very nicely penned

Nancy Kaufman

July 16, 2024 at 2:28 PM

Dear Eve, This gives such a strong visual, even for me with out it's picture. Congratulations on your win. Well done!! Blessings to you..

Sara Kendrick

July 16, 2024 at 8:48 AM

I like the way you went with the picture as your inspiration. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Sara K

Valsa George

July 14, 2024 at 8:55 PM

The wooden bridge on the verge of collapse gives a sick feeling. No body will dare to climb on it to reach the other end. Well written, dear Eve. All the Best.