The Woodcarvers Reward

He walked along the beach a man forlorn
Forgotten were his dreams, his heart was torn
The gentle waves spoke of the years gone by
And drew salt water down from saddened eye  

He saw some driftwood lying on the shore
It sparked his interest and he longed for more
He touched it gently, to his great delight
Sandalwood he’d found:  passion to ignite

The need to carve once more came to his mind
A joy he’d lost and could no longer find
He took it home, that battered piece of wood
With hopes to turn it into something good

A mane of hair took shape beneath his hands
Flowing waves of curly wooden strands
Round shoulders of the woman of his dreams
And breasts and waist of beauty carved supreme

Gracefully her form began to take on shape
When he was done he stood there mouth agape
She was a goddess made of his desire
A love for her consumed him like a fire

At night he wished upon a falling star
She’d come to life and chase his sorrows far
He looked at her before he fell asleep
And smiled for he’d forgotten how to weep

He felt a stirring there beside his bed
A presence seemed to hover near his head
He looked upon his statue now in flesh
Her body like a breeze was young and fresh

She pressed her lips so gently over his
“I need to tell you, love, listen to this
I was discarded, battered, wounded sore
I chose to be a part of life no more

You saw in me my hidden beauty fine
Your wish has reached the heart of the Divine
I stand before you, answer to your prayer
Sent to give you love and tend’rest care.”

She kissed his lips, and veiled him in her hair
His tears she wiped, this answer to his prayer
With him she lay, her breast his pillow sweet
The richest fare of sandalwood, his treat

What else transpires is curtained from our sight
Burning sandalwood…..scents the glowing night

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Eastman Avatar
November 15, 2013 at 10:50 AM
A tremendous poem... so very well written. A favorite of mine.
Lamoureux Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 9:42 AM
Hi Eileen, I hope you had a great day.
Trifiatis Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 4:39 AM
Eileen, this is a marvel of poetry, a symphony of ideas coming to life, incarnating our deepest desires of our noblest thoughts to come true! You are the finest woodcarver of poetry! 7!!
Carroll Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 2:57 PM
Hi Eileen, A most creative and charming write! Ken
Tacito Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 8:16 AM
What a tale. What reverent, gripping emotions in this writing. You have outdone yourself, again. Keep this up. "I stand before you"...vital words. Tremendous job.
Manassian Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 8:20 AM
:) Hi DRAKE!!!! WELCOME! I've missed ya! Hope all is well...thanks ever so much for your wonderful post. As always.....you bring joy! :)
Mcdaid Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:11 AM
dazzling beautiful piece
Manassian Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:39 AM
I like dazzling...thanks, Liam. Your latest is dazzling as well!!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 4:12 AM
Good morning Eileen.
Manassian Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:39 AM
I love the morning greeting, Richard. Thank you! :)
Onclaud Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 9:53 PM
a story to remember with shades of pygmalion or something near to it, eileen... you shine bright!... smashin'!..:) huggs
Manassian Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:40 AM
Thanks, Nette. I should remember Pygmalion, but I don't. Will look it up. I'm curious now! Thanks, dear...hugs
Hendricks Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 8:20 PM
Yet another one of yours off to my fave file and also my personal one. You've outdone yourself this time, my talented girlfriend. Like your subject you gave life to this piece of art. Open up that curtain. These things are best not left to my imagination (lol). Good going, girlfriend. You've got the gift. Smoochahuggies, girlfriend. Licia XOXOXOXOX
Manassian Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:42 AM
SMOOCHAHUGGIES....GIRLFRIEND! You ROCK!!!! Thanks, hon. I'm glad you liked this. It just come to my mind. I read about sandalwood in a poem long ago, and I liked the sound of it. Glad you liked this. I'm honored. HUGSSSS!!!!!
Chircop Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 6:42 PM
This poem is beyond beautiful dearest Eileen..Amazing thoughts penned.Tnks for the journey to this fantastic fantasy world.
Manassian Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:43 AM
WOW! Beyond beautiful! What a lovely place. Thanks, my sweet! I always am touched by your visits! :) Hugs hugs hugs!!!!!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 6:20 PM
see comment below.
Manassian Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:43 AM
;)
O'Leary Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 4:33 PM
Very nice... Terry
Manassian Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 4:52 PM
Thanks, Terry. I do appreciate it!
Seal Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 3:33 PM
Love this story my little Desert Orchid, I carve a little, mostly in flat wood cut offs, horses mainly, think I'll try a woman next, see if I get lucky haha. Wonderful write. Take care, Richard
Seal Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 4:41 PM
Rick you're going to get us into trouble mate lol :):):)
Seal Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 4:40 PM
Come on you jockeys, get off me back, quit riding me lol. Have you never of the famous race horse 'Desert Orchid', now if I could bring that one back to life we'd all be winners HAH, and Licia, young ladies should always listen to their mothers, mothers know best haha
Manassian Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 8:01 AM
HA HA HA HA HA HA! Licia...both of these Richards seem to be naughty! Hmmmmmmm....I've long been toying with the idea of writing a poem about these two who share the same name....I was going to call it..."Naughty and Nice!" Hmmmmm....It seems the title must read Naughty and Naughty! HA HA! Please...do send him a pic. I would....but he would lots a big big chunk of wood! ;) HA HA HA! Oh Licia...we aren't any better!
Hendricks Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 7:58 AM
Hahaha. I'm not sure which Richard my mother warned me against but she should have warned me against both. Sharp answer, Richard Lamoureux. Richard Seale, I'll send you a pic to practice on (wink, wink).
Manassian Avatar
November 10, 2013 at 1:00 AM
Richard Lamoureux....You are becoming naughty as well! ;) I wonder what Richard Seal will say that this. HA HA! Good one!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 6:21 PM
Either way there will be some riding involved.
Manassian Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 4:53 PM
Oh dear me!!! Better switch to a woman soon! You wouldn't want that horse to come to life! HA HA HA HA HA! Mr Seal.........YOU CRACK ME UP! ;) Dear me. Whittle away! Good luck! ;)
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November 9, 2013 at 11:32 AM
I find myself really taken with this - unusual for me, as I'm not normally a great fan of 'story' poems, but it really drew me in and held my attention from first line to last; I think it's really well written, and it somehow reminds me of that fairy tale about the snow maiden who came to life - only a more sensual take! this is the second time lately that I've been impressed by an iambic pentameter poem...:)
Manassian Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 4:59 PM
:) Thanks, Charlotte. I was going to free verse this one, but somehow, it begged to be in rhyme. I was going for sonnet, but that wasn't enough for me to bring the story to life, so........iambic pentameter it is. I'm so uplifted by your lovely post. Your honesty speaks to me. Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 9:01 AM
My oh my this is beyond exceptional! Love it, love it, love it!
Lamoureux Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 6:20 PM
You would be correct. I can see this being turned into a short film.
Manassian Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 4:50 PM
And I love this post, Richard..........I feel that you really do! Thanks!!! Ever so much!!!
Bauer Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 8:06 AM
a wonderful story, beautifully written!
Manassian Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Ilene....Thanks. Sorry for not visiting as often....I will come to see what you have posted soon. Hugs! :)
Andresen Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 8:03 AM
- So romantic and beautifully written Eileen, a amazing poem!! - Love it!! - Have a beautiful weekend dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
November 9, 2013 at 8:07 AM
Thanks, Sunshine! So lovely to have your smiling face here on my page. Love you, Anne Lise....Hugs!
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