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The Wonders

The unknown of "WHAT IFS" Sets the mind into confusions It twirls and twists into knots and explodes into madness... Walking like a zombie, Heartless of emotions but walking aimlessly to the Never Never Land of unknown! Seducing your mind with beautiful dreams A sweet grin soften up your face The hunger in your heart is near damn as high as the sky goes your hopes rises even for the trickiest fool of the perfect illusion in the shadows. You reach out to grasp on the rainbow so beautifully slanting above you only to be graciously disheartened; yet again! Down fall you go swimming in your pool of tears and the wonders of it all "WHAT IFS" Strutting out as if to open a freak-show... Smile! Written by; Akkina R Downing 09/24/16

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Harry Horsman

Date: 1/9/2021 10:40:00 PM

I too, love to go back to first posted poem of poets whom i believe write wonderful poetry...Love this...Harry

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/17/2018 1:16:00 PM

Wow! What an absolutely wondrous first poem this is my dear friend! I can certainly relate to you beautifully expressive poetic lines Kina and your imagery is beyond amazing; 'The hunger in your heart is near damn as high as the sky goes' - high-flying imagery like that sends my heart soaring! This poem is breathtaking and with every repeat read the more ingenious I think you are.. Butterfly kisses, sun-filled hugs and sizzle love dearest one.. ~Su

Susan Ashley
Date: 3/17/2018 7:04:00 PM

I'm sorry you had a sad kinda broken heart dear friend. It's amazing how a broken heart can move our muse in beautifully poetic ways.. :))

Akkina Downing
Date: 3/17/2018 5:41:00 PM

Wrote this with a sad kinda broken heart at that time. Lol! But Su, you are too kind praising me and I truly appreciate you with all my heart... Warmest hug and sizzle love ~ Kina

Paul Callus

Date: 12/28/2017 3:29:00 PM

Hi Akkina...I've gone back in time to read this first poem which you posted at Soup, and it was indeed a grand entrance! Sorry I was not there to welcome you:) Hus & smiles // paul

Akkina Downing
Date: 12/28/2017 3:57:00 PM

Awe, Paul, thank you so much! I truly appreciate your sweet comment, and your friendship! Hugs and smiles :)

Edward Mccall

Date: 8/5/2017 4:32:00 PM

This is another amazing read in it goes to my faves. {;-)

Akkina Downing
Date: 12/28/2017 3:57:00 PM

I'm a bit late but thank you so much my dear friend Ed... hugs and smiles :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 7/3/2017 4:00:00 PM

Thought I'd stop by your first poem. Interesting write :)

Akkina Downing
Date: 7/3/2017 7:09:00 PM

Thanks Debbie, I appreciate your visit and comment :)

James Inman

Date: 4/27/2017 10:54:00 PM

Interesting write Akkina, relationships are very complicated things. The beautiful highs and the painful lows, and all of the pretending to be OK when they end.

Akkina Downing
Date: 4/28/2017 4:53:00 AM

Yes very true, James, and thank you so much :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2017 8:44:00 PM

Hi, Akkina. I thought I would come way down here to your first post at Soup and give you a very belated welcome! This was a nice one to see. I'm glad to see you at Soup!

Akkina Downing
Date: 4/20/2017 8:50:00 PM

You're a sweetheart Miss Andrea. Thank you so much :)

James Horn

Date: 4/19/2017 7:08:00 AM

Downing Street in London is even named after you. There are two sides of WHAT IF. What if I did or what if I did not or what if I will think about it for a while longer? Jim Horn

Akkina Downing
Date: 4/19/2017 10:46:00 AM

Thank you Mr. Horn for your time and comment :)

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/14/2016 12:09:00 AM

The piece is intriguing but I am unfamiliar with "WHAT IFS" please explain.

Akkina Downing
Date: 12/14/2016 4:00:00 AM

Hehe... "What ifs" is a plural word of what if. You say what if at the beginning of a question. It's just that there are many of questions of "what ifs" popping out in your head at all the same time. Thank you for your visit, I appreciate it so much :)

Kyle Kriticos

Date: 11/3/2016 7:24:00 AM

This poem is very well done! Aa good read through and through thx for sharing, u rock !

Akkina Downing
Date: 11/3/2016 10:23:00 AM

:) thank you! (:

Karen Edwards-Gregory

Date: 10/18/2016 4:50:00 PM

Love the tone of this poem. I certainly identify with the message. Nice!

Akkina Downing
Date: 10/18/2016 5:15:00 PM

Thank you Karen! :)

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 10/11/2016 8:37:00 AM

A deep, emotional piece.... Congrats Akkina, for having your work featured in the Poetrysoup homepage!!! ;-)

Akkina Downing
Date: 10/11/2016 1:35:00 PM

Thank you, Teddy!

Skat A

Date: 10/4/2016 7:55:00 PM

AKKINA, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT

Akkina Downing
Date: 10/4/2016 10:46:00 PM

Thank you very much!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/1/2016 10:22:00 PM

Akkina,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Akkina Downing
Date: 10/2/2016 7:21:00 PM

Hi Linda, thank you for welcoming, and most definitely I'd love check out yours and read them. I love to read poems. I've been writing for a while, although I'm not that good... Lol! Again thank you!