The Woman That I Need

I've seen that look in your eyes before.
You don't even say nothing and you hit the door.
Just tell me, baby, as I look in your eyes.
Why do we have to go on living this lie?

We made our vows complete.
But one night of ecstasy. 
Has turned your heart away from me.
All that we shared was true.
But now when I look at you.
You aren’t the woman that I need.

So go on now, girl, and see him like you always do.
And come on back to me with that cheap perfume.
I guess it’s plain to me that you’ve picked your man.
But before you leave help me understand

Cause we made our vows complete.
But one night of ecstasy. 
Has turned your heart away from me.
All that we shared was true.
But now when I look at you.
You aren’t the woman that I need.

I guess all that’s left to do is pray.
For God to help take this sorrow away.
But as for the way I feel, I’ll tell you the truth.
Nobody can take my love for you.

We made our vows complete.
But one night of ecstasy. 
Has turned your heart away from me.
All that we shared was true.
But now when I look at you.
You aren’t the woman that I need.


For Paula Swanson's "Play me a cheatin' song" contest
9th place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 23, 2011 at 3:04 PM
congrats on your fine win. cory
Hunt Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 3:06 PM
Thank you Cory!
Hunt Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Thank you all for your congrats. They mean a lot to me:)
Song Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 2:32 PM
You got it bad for this woman....move on I say!Move on fast!! ha ha. Great love song to drown in your root beer. Congrats to you! Gwendolen
Hunt Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 2:49 PM
LOL. I wish I did, but this was complete fiction. Made a good country song though:)
Mehta Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of paula, matt
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May 23, 2011 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations Matt on your win in Paula's contest. Great poem. Love, Joyce
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May 23, 2011 at 1:14 PM
Congrats Matt on your super win in Paula's contest with this amazing creative write and entry luv.. enjoy your top ten victory and success...
Taylor Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 12:58 PM
Congrats, Matt. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
Brown Avatar
May 23, 2011 at 10:46 AM
Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest Matt. Love, Carol
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May 23, 2011 at 9:47 AM
Great cheatin' song, Matt. Congratulations on your win in Paula's contest! Love, Carolyn
Song Avatar
May 19, 2011 at 8:36 PM
Best of luck in the contest with this cheatin write. I know many will ask if it's true....if it is, hang in there. If it's not,..thank your lucky stars. Gwendolen
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May 15, 2011 at 10:51 PM
Although a painful experience to have to go through, you did very well in writing these lyrics! Hope it was fiction, but if it isn't, I'm sorry you had to go through that. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing. Caroline.
Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 11:04 PM
No it was complete fiction. Some people(points arrow down) take things a little too seriously. Thank you for your support:) R.M.
Mist Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 8:07 PM
you want to have a go at me brendan? your hands will be filled very soon...with explainations to the authorities
Hunt Avatar
May 15, 2011 at 8:09 PM
Hahahah! Buddy you kill me. My name is not Brendan, so don't even pretend that you know me. The last thing you would ever want to do is actually know me. Trust me pal;)
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