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The Woman of My Heart

Neutrality in your colour seduces me and overwhelms my pride. Originality in your words attracts me and drives my senses to you. Prenuptial agreement, I must sign, without delay. Quest no more! You are my type of girl. You are with no doubt the woman of my heart

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Abdulhafeez Oyewole

Date: 5/18/2014 10:35:00 AM

'Prenuptial' makes it whole in their angle.. Not about me but about them.

Goodness Lanre

Date: 6/2/2013 1:13:00 PM

WOW! great one there. Romantic.

Skat A

Date: 6/1/2013 2:36:00 PM

this is very good, Abdulhafeez, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/1/2013 12:09:00 PM

Quite a different one here Abdulhafeez..' I see there is romantic intention; with the counterpoint of a prenuptual agreement." was that because you loved her in spite of her averice.?? if so i suppose that's quite a challenge anyhow congrats..' Joe..)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2013 10:05:00 AM

Abdulhafeez, CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/26/2013 3:29:00 PM

how nice this is. Well done in the ABC form. It is not easy to do!!

Terry Burns

Date: 5/25/2013 6:52:00 PM

Like it. Very good verse. Don't know about the prenup part. I think if a woman loves you she wouldn't need a prenup. Anyway fine lines my friend and thanks for your comments on the man poem.

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/23/2013 8:23:00 AM

*lol* this is great A.O the prenuptial line added a different dimension.

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 5/21/2013 5:36:00 PM

beautiful. SandyIvy

Joseph May

Date: 5/21/2013 3:30:00 PM

very nice write ...good luck in the contest