The Woman Named Fire

The Woman Named Fire

The eternal woman named Fire
Eternal but not immortal
Her life remains a fragile gift
Given by God yet owned by man
Her brightness fills the dark sky
Red, yellow, blue and all colors in between
Her skin evokes romance and fear
The pit is her prison
Struggling to be free she fights a futile fight
She is held captive by remaining embers
Her fingers reach to the skies
Grabbing the air as it rushes up
Hoping to be pulled away from her torture
Rebellion fills the air with sparks and smoke
Parts of her soul being ripped away
Her pain makes her bigger and stronger as she fights
The more she fights
The more of herself is ripped away
But with all the pain
All the torture she never gives up
In the end her spirit is wasted
Destroyed by her efforts
Her body lies as a pile of graying charcoal
Her soul is just the last few whiffs of smoke
Her hopes are the last few burning embers
But alas the woman named Fire is dead
And nothing remains
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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December 20, 2011 at 9:32 AM
Bravo Poet of Poets!
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August 4, 2011 at 7:42 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International Poetry contest. I wish you the best in the final round Robert. Love, Carol
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May 31, 2011 at 8:06 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved feature this week Robert. Love, Carol
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May 30, 2011 at 12:04 PM
Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, robert
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April 4, 2011 at 1:58 PM
Wonderful character sketch of the woman named fire, fantastic personification, robert
Brown Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 12:47 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today and will be back again soon to read more Robert. May you have a week of good health, joy and sunshine to light up your life. Love, Carol
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