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The Woman Down the Street

Don't let the ring on her finger Or the baby on her hip Trick you into thinking You don't need to worry about The woman down the street. Don't let the three year commitment Or his words of sweet serenity Trick you into thinking You don't need to worry about The man in your bed. When you're working late Or out with friends The woman down the street And the man in your bed Sneak through the shadows of the night To betray your trust. Don't be tricked into thinking You don't need to worry about The woman down the street.

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Date: 1/9/2015 1:54:00 PM
Don't take your eyes off the woman down the street because she has her eyes on your man and will steal him if she can! Lizzie this is an excellent piece! Well done and congratulations on a worthy win! Pandita.
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Date: 1/3/2015 8:41:00 AM
Interesting and fantastic write on the theme of jealousy, congrats on the win, Lizzie
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Date: 1/3/2015 1:55:00 AM
Congrats on your fine win Lizzie huggs
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Date: 1/2/2015 11:28:00 PM
LIZZIE, Congratulations on your win. Awesome "Green-Eyed Monster, poem." Love LINDA
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:49:00 PM
ooh loved the scenario here - brilliantly creative many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/2/2015 2:41:00 PM
As a winner of my contest, I congratulate you! Verlena
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