The Wizard's Wisdom

Skipping along with three friends by her side
Anticipation was high.
Whirling tornadoes had long disappeared;
Not a dark cloud in the sky.

Yellow as daffodils was the brick road,
Yellow the ripening corn,
And it had coloured the heart of the lion
Leaving him sad and forlorn.

Suddenly Dorothy stopped in her tracks
‘Was that you, Scarecrow’ she said.
‘Whispering  jibberish under your hat?
I didn’t quite catch the thread’.

‘No it was me’ piped a tremulous voice
‘Cast your eyes down to the ground’.
Yellow as summer sun, creeping along
Such a sad creature they found.

‘Please can you help me escape from this path,
Life is so treacherous here.
Camouflaged as I am with the brick road,
For my own life I do fear’.

Off  to the Wizard they wended their way
Shy caterpillar in tow,
Full of bright hopes of a change to their lives,
For it had been promised so.

After the Wizard had heard the bug’s plea
This was his bitter reply.
'You must return to the yellow brick road
And life will change by and by.’

Heavy of heart, and with tears in his eyes,
Back to face danger he crept.
So much for miracles, life was unfair;
His fate he’d have to accept.

Change started happening after a while,
Feelings he couldn’t explain,
But as he flew o’er the yellow brick road
His heart felt joyful again.

19/11/18

'Off to see the wizard poetry contest' : Sponsored by: Charles Messina
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Allison Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 5:43 AM
What a charming story Wendy, many congratulations on your win :-) hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 1:33 AM
Thanks, Jan. The power of the imagination is wonderful!
Roper Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 10:53 PM
Great imagination and imagery, Wendy, enjoyed reading. .. ... .Congratulations on your 1st place win!
Watson Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:40 AM
Thank you so much,Eve. I've enjoyed reading your poetry too.
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 10:32 PM
Wonderfully creative, imaginative take on the contest, Wendy. Congrats on your well-deserved podium win! Season's best. ~ Gershon
Wolf Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:08 PM
---as I am for yours, Wendy. It is highly valued! Happy December, Gershon
Watson Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:37 AM
Thank you for reading and commenting,Gershon. You were one of the first poets to encourage me when I submitted my early offerings to the site and I've been very grateful for your continued feedback.
Flood Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 6:17 PM
Nice one, Wendy. There ought to be more metamorph-a-wotsit poems. Well done.
Watson Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:36 AM
The very word sends kafkaesque shivers up my spine! Thank you for reading and commenting,Terry. I have enjoyed your gift of rhythm and rhyme when reading your poetry.
Messina Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 5:35 AM
I love this, Wendy! Congratulations on your top win and thank you for supporting my contest.. Happy Holidays :) Charlie
Watson Avatar
December 6, 2018 at 3:29 AM
Thank you Charles for challenging us with this one. It took me on a fun journey!
Allison Avatar
November 25, 2018 at 4:04 AM
what a sweet take on the theme, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 2:11 PM
Thanks,Jan. I hadn't seen the film since childhood but have just watched an amazing school production on Youtube for fun.
Sergi Avatar
November 22, 2018 at 11:49 AM
A great twist in the Wizard of Oz, Wendy! you have my vote!
Watson Avatar
November 30, 2018 at 2:14 PM
That's very kind of you,Ralph. Some versions have been much more adventurous on their travels but I guess the journey from caterpillar to butterfly is pretty amazing too!
Krutsinger Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 2:08 PM
I love the way the bug's despair was saved by metamorphis.
Watson Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 1:32 AM
And I love your summary in a nutshell! Thanks,Caren.
Cunningham Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 12:50 PM
So well written Wendy, great take one the contest theme. Tom.
Watson Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 1:32 AM
Thank you for your kind comments, Tom.
Warrior Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 10:31 AM
Lovely rendition my friend...ready for a win Wendy...love & light...^WW^
Watson Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 1:31 AM
Thank you for your confidence in my efforts, WW.
La France Avatar
November 19, 2018 at 8:16 AM
Wendy, this is wonderful, so beautifully penned, I actually feel a tear for the little caterpillar turned butterfly, this has to be a winner, well it is to me and a fav too ~
Watson Avatar
May 9, 2020 at 1:31 AM
Thank you for such an encouraging comment, Dear Heart.
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