The Withering Warrior

D  irections of our lives seem futile and our hearts obstructed.
E  very person, every woman, every child, every
M  an has lost the freedom that was promised - now corrupted,
O  bliterated by those whose rigid rules destroy our memories
C  asting our will, our dreams, our freedom aside 
R  elinquishing our growth as a nation to thrive freely.
A  fghanistan you lay like the wounded warrior that lied
C  alling out “I can no longer fight, I must hide” for me to be.
Y  ears have come and gone too long, as our history is no longer the prize.


G  lory to god to protect our children as they live with tyrants,
O  ligarchs and kings that take food from their mouths.
N  othing under our sun will shine in this moment of violence
E  xcept silver bullets shot with hate to scare our souls to bow


Sept. 2, 2021

Message in an Acrostic 2 Poetry Contest

Afghanistan Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann
sponsored by Kim Rodriguez
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Ashley Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 6:54 PM
Dear Lonna, your potent and expressive pen spills with fierce yet poignant passion. Such a moving piece! Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you, my friend.. ~Susan
Blodgett Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 2:58 PM
Thank you for wonderful comments Susan. You are always so encouraging! Best thoughts!
Hankins Avatar
September 2, 2021 at 6:37 PM
Lonna, your poem is exceptional. You have pled the case for a defeated country.
Blodgett Avatar
September 5, 2021 at 2:59 PM
Dear “L”. I so appreciate your words and work!
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