The Wisp Of

the wisp
of an old tune lost
in bird song
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Makama Avatar
May 16, 2015 at 12:13 PM
incredible piece! Keeping on giving us such lovely lines. #7. Happy weekend
Callus Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 3:43 PM
Lovely haiku, Thomas. #7 // paul
Allison Avatar
May 14, 2015 at 2:30 PM
This is delightful Thomas you really excel at this form:-) Hugs Jan xx
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