The Wish

I wish for a friend who would stay I wish the sun would shine each day I wish I knew what made me so blue I wish there was something I could do I wish that like a child I could play I wish all the voices would go away I wish I could hide from the hullabaloo I wish my smile was not always untrue I wish the pain would fly far faraway I wish my lonely life could end today Sometimes our wishes do come true With one step my mortal coil I now undo

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Constance La France

Date: 7/5/2015 10:40:00 PM

Shane, I too have wished for many of the same things you captured so well in your write, a wonderful 7 and hope you find some peace and tranquility and thanks for visiting my senyru 13

Shane Cooper
Date: 7/5/2015 10:49:00 PM

Thanks for your words and the 7, sometimes it is hard but i have found some very kind special people here who lift me up every time i stumble.They are my blessing. Your senyru 13 was the work of a true poetess. i thank you for sharing yourself with us. It is not always easy to bare ones heart and soul. love Shane xxxx

Kp Nunez

Date: 6/26/2015 11:09:00 AM

I wish you'll write more, get it off your chest, Shane. Take care. HUgs! PS. We're just a soupmail away, you know.

Shane Cooper
Date: 6/26/2015 7:33:00 PM

Thanks Kim, I do write most every day but do not post a lot of what I write, just share with a few friends. i truely appreciate your concern and i will remember about soup mail. Take care of yourself. Kind generous people such as yourself are candles in ths dark world. Love Shane xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/26/2015 6:37:00 AM

- My wish for you: I want you to catch the sun, stars and the moon - I wish you would smile at life and all your dreams came true - A sad and touching poem, dear friend Shane - I wish you a beautiful and happy weekend: ) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper
Date: 6/26/2015 7:42:00 PM

Dearest Anne-Lise, what a wonderful wish you make for me. I am so very touched, thankyou so so much my dear gentle friend. May your weekend be blessed with happiness and joy for yourself and your loved ones. Love Shane xxx

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 6/26/2015 4:19:00 AM

I WISH YOU ALL THE BEST SHANE:-)

Shane Cooper
Date: 6/26/2015 4:49:00 AM

Thanks njeri, I appreciate your dropping in. love Shane xxx