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THE WINTER TIME BLUES

Dashing through the snow,
It's thirty-two below,
My hands are cold, my feet are numb,
For some this weather sure ain't fun.

My eyes are tearing up, 
My nose has turned bright red,
My fingers hurt, the car won't start,
I should have stayed in bed.

Ohhhh! Off to work, Off to work,
I gotta get to work.
The car won't start, the battery died,
I'll have to try to hitch a ride.

Standing in the cold.
I'm waiting for the bus.
If I don't freeze to death today,
It's 'cause pneumonia got me fust.

Copyright © Judy Ball | Year Posted 2023

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Jennifer Proxenos Date: 1/28/2024 7:53:00 AM Love this fun alike jingle bells song , i like doing this and rhyming my own words to popular music also - so nicely penned my friend Judy . Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 12/31/2023 12:32:00 PM The UK really struggles when it snows... I personally have not had such struggles, but I can get an understanding of it from your poem.. nicely done Judy.. Login to Reply Judy Ball Date: 12/31/2023 2:22:00 PM Thank you so much Silent One. My first year in Canada I was thrilled at my first sight of snow but then I went out in it and IT WAS WET! Then the first blizzard hit and I could see how people die in the stuff. I still like it though. Thanks bunches God Bless and Happy New Year. JB

Sotto Poet Date: 12/31/2023 6:14:00 AM Cool piece of writing, Judy! I delighted in the engaging yet capricious conclusion. My best wishes for a wonderful day, Login to Reply Judy Ball Date: 12/31/2023 8:50:00 AM Thank you so much my friend. God Bless and Happy New Year to you and yours. JB

Tom Cunningham Date: 12/30/2023 9:51:00 PM Lol I used to work in all weathers but now retired I can watch from inside in the warm. Happy New year to you Judy. Tom Login to Reply Judy Ball Date: 12/30/2023 10:17:00 PM Thank you so much Tom. God Bless, JB

Kim Rodrigues Date: 12/30/2023 7:12:00 PM LOL…fun, Judy! Login to Reply Judy Ball Date: 12/30/2023 10:30:00 PM Thank you so much Kim. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit Date: 12/30/2023 3:29:00 PM Yes, I hear the rhythm of jingle bells, Judy. Your poem brings forth the blues of winter--though, where I am, it is just cold. Happy New Year, Judy. Login to Reply Judy Ball Date: 12/30/2023 10:42:00 PM Thank you so much Vijay. God Bless, JB