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The Winter Effect

As I ambled down the snow-white pathway, I noticed the bitter winter on that cold-riddled day. I saw buildings enclosed by snow, that partly shielded me from the sky's dull glow. I feIt numbness on my fingers arising, while marching through the violent winds without compromising. I smelt the sweet scent of coffee brewing, oh, how enticed my nostrils were that morning! I heard the sound of trees whistling, and the haste of feet staggering. As snow piled on the sidewalks like heavenly glitter, this reassured the presence of winter.

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Date: 12/26/2013 12:29:00 AM
Daniel, , Hope you are enjoying the holidays, -- Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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Date: 12/19/2013 12:29:00 PM
- Welcome to P-Soup, Daniel ! - Nice to read your first poem here.:)) - Hope you will have much pleasure to be with us. - Wishing you good luck - have a nice day! - (Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours). - My first greeting to you from Norway. - I will come back to read more.... another day :) - oxox / /Anne-Lise :)
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Daniel Omoighe
Date: 12/21/2013 4:58:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome :) my greetings from South Africa :)
Date: 12/19/2013 9:28:00 AM
Daniel, great cold imagery, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. Dropping by to invite you to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -Looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Daniel Omoighe
Date: 12/21/2013 5:03:00 AM
Thank you Linda, that was my first official poem but I have always wanted to try writing poetry. I guess this will be the best place to get professional opinions :) take care!

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