The Winter Blahs

The sky opened up and suddenly, snow begins to fall
quickly, the large snowflakes jump from the sky
and start to pile up on the ground, quickly covering
whatever is in it's path, including people and cars
The windshield wipers can't keep up, even on high
the thought of just going back home crosses my mind
Winter is not my favorite season, but the beauty of the layer
of white that covers the world is not lost on me
Cold hits me in the face as I leave my warm car
and the beauty fades a bit as walking on slick surfaces
reminds me why Winter makes me grumpy
I don't like being cold, the beautiful snow makes even
walking hard to do.  Can we just fast forward to Spring?
The wind blows and the cold, wet snow hits me in my face
and I sigh and try not to grumple as I get inside as fast
as I can without falling on my face.

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Date: 2/20/2025 6:15:00 AM
Awwn dear poetic soul, i can feel your need and longing to fast forward to spring and where everything will be bright and warm and easy to navigate. I really love the imagery here and how descriptive your poem is and how it flows with such sincere emotions and feelings! Pleasure reading your poem, hope it isnt too cold where you are at right now. Sending you light today and always
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 2/20/2025 6:20:00 AM
Thanks, Ink! It IS cold here and we got a couple of inches of snow again last night.
Date: 2/17/2025 5:37:00 AM
Dear Kathleen, Oh, how I felt every flake and frozen gust in your poem! I love how you captured winter’s beauty and burdens so perfectly, its shimmering wonder and its sneaky, slippery trials. I was right there with you, longing for spring. Absolutely loved this! Stay warm, my friend. Winter Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 2/18/2025 3:39:00 AM
Thank you, Daniel. This poem kind of sounds like a temper tantrum. I am definitely looking forward to spring.
Date: 2/16/2025 2:04:00 PM
Good one and I am with you on this. Today had to run in to our church and clean sidewalks and then back home to clean my driveway of wet, slushy ice and snow. Cant wait for spring.
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Kathleen Hassall
Date: 2/18/2025 3:41:00 AM
I am weary of the cold weather, but Spring IS coming. Thanks for reading my temper tantrum in poem form!
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