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The Winner Remixed

AABBA I just won a thousand with luck I thought I would share with the ruck But after the bills And a couple of thrills I'm now in the hole, ten bucks I think I got it right this time, Thanks for the heads up Andrea "Got to burn to learn"lol

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2014 10:12:00 AM

Dear Jerry, you crack me up. Money you win is often spent too quickly. Love the limerick. Also got quite a laugh on the comment you left about the "bug" who knows when to leave. You have quite a sense of humor! Well done. Love, Carolyn

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/6/2014 8:18:00 PM

Thanks Carolyn it's always encouraging to here positive feedback, The Bud Was inspired by your poem, it was easy to identify with .

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/4/2014 7:30:00 AM

Cute one..Got a chuckle..Those that win many end up worse off after a big win than they were before the winning...Enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Jerry T Curtis
Date: 4/6/2014 8:18:00 PM

Thank you Sara

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/4/2014 10:13:00 AM

You got that right, Sara!