Jerry T Curtis Poet Limerick

The Winner Remixed

AABBA

I just won a thousand with luck

I thought I would share with the ruck

But after the bills 

And a couple of thrills

I'm now in the hole, ten bucks



I think I got it right this time,

Thanks for the heads up Andrea
"Got to burn to learn"lol

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Carolyn Devonshire April 4, 2014 at 10:12 AM Dear Jerry, you crack me up. Money you win is often spent too quickly. Love the limerick. Also got quite a laugh on the comment you left about the "bug" who knows when to leave. You have quite a sense of humor! Well done. Love, Carolyn Jerry T Curtis April 6, 2014 at 8:18 PM Thanks Carolyn it's always encouraging to here positive feedback, The Bud Was inspired by your poem, it was easy to identify with .

Sara Kendrick April 4, 2014 at 7:30 AM Cute one..Got a chuckle..Those that win many end up worse off after a big win than they were before the winning...Enjoyed reading this one..Sara Jerry T Curtis April 6, 2014 at 8:18 PM Thank you Sara Carolyn Devonshire April 4, 2014 at 10:13 AM You got that right, Sara!