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The Wine Lover

There was a man who's feeling fine
Only when he was drinking wine.
One day when he was drinking milk
He stained his shirt made of fine silk.
And felt a dull pain in his spine.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Parmale Avatar
December 16, 2017 at 1:32 AM
This is very interesting and very funny,dear friend... Excellent write...
Ashley Avatar
December 9, 2017 at 3:59 PM
A wonderful and entertaining Limerick Ghita. Congratulations on your fine win with your witty write. Warmest wishes ~Susan
Gauthier Avatar
November 16, 2017 at 8:01 PM
Thanks for your winning entry. Funny limerick, Ghita.
Smith Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 8:25 AM
Congratulations Ghita, good for you...
Manaila Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 9:01 AM
Thank you very much, Charlie.
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Congratulations, Ghita, on your win :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Manaila Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 6:42 AM
Thank you very much for these beautiful words.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 4:45 PM
I can only agree with Darren's comment regarding the syllable count but the still sponsor liked it :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Manaila Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 6:49 AM
Thank you for congratulions. I know it is not a perfect limerick,but because my native language is not English, the sillables count is a difficult task for me .
White Avatar
October 9, 2017 at 2:31 AM
Your poem is ALMOST a limerick, it's only the syllables that are not completely right, but the poem itself is delightful :)
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