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The Wine Lover

There was a man who's feeling fine Only when he was drinking wine. One day when he was drinking milk He stained his shirt made of fine silk. And felt a dull pain in his spine.

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Anand Parmale

Date: 12/16/2017 1:32:00 AM

This is very interesting and very funny,dear friend... Excellent write...

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/9/2017 3:59:00 PM

A wonderful and entertaining Limerick Ghita. Congratulations on your fine win with your witty write. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/16/2017 8:01:00 PM

Thanks for your winning entry. Funny limerick, Ghita.

Charlie Smith

Date: 10/25/2017 8:25:00 AM

Congratulations Ghita, good for you...

Ghita Manaila
Date: 10/25/2017 9:01:00 AM

Thank you very much, Charlie.

Eve Roper

Date: 10/24/2017 9:08:00 PM

Congratulations, Ghita, on your win :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Ghita Manaila
Date: 10/25/2017 6:42:00 AM

Thank you very much for these beautiful words.

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2017 4:45:00 PM

I can only agree with Darren's comment regarding the syllable count but the still sponsor liked it :-) congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Ghita Manaila
Date: 10/25/2017 6:49:00 AM

Thank you for congratulions. I know it is not a perfect limerick,but because my native language is not English, the sillables count is a difficult task for me .

Darren White

Date: 10/9/2017 2:31:00 AM

Your poem is ALMOST a limerick, it's only the syllables that are not completely right, but the poem itself is delightful :)