Barbara Gorelick Poet Kimo

The Window

reluctantly I look through the window
children playing, their laughter
refreshes memories

hanging in the closet a little coat
its owner no longer plays
pain her new companion


Barbara Gorelick
THROUGH MY WINDOW
1/16/14

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Nette Onclaud January 25, 2014 at 3:22 PM love the last line, ipactful, BG.. sweet congrats on your win in my contest.. huggs

Sara Kendrick January 23, 2014 at 4:54 PM This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta January 23, 2014 at 8:15 AM Beautiful interpretation ands congratulations on the win, Barbara

Chris G. Vaillancourt January 19, 2014 at 3:55 PM What a nicely constructed piece of writing!

Dr. Vandana Sharma January 16, 2014 at 10:44 PM This is so heart touching, made me cry. Being a mother myself to a three year old, i can realize how painful the loss of a child is.