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The Window

reluctantly I look through the window children playing, their laughter refreshes memories hanging in the closet a little coat its owner no longer plays pain her new companion
Barbara Gorelick THROUGH MY WINDOW 1/16/14

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/25/2014 3:22:00 PM
love the last line, ipactful, BG.. sweet congrats on your win in my contest.. huggs
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Date: 1/23/2014 4:54:00 PM
This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara
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Date: 1/23/2014 8:15:00 AM
Beautiful interpretation ands congratulations on the win, Barbara
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Date: 1/19/2014 3:55:00 PM
What a nicely constructed piece of writing!
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Date: 1/16/2014 10:44:00 PM
This is so heart touching, made me cry. Being a mother myself to a three year old, i can realize how painful the loss of a child is.
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