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The Wind-Chime Tree

The wind-chime tree 
 is singing in heavenly voice,
 there are Angels beneath the golden rusty
 red leaves,
 There singing out in Harmony 
 a slow and sad ;'hymn in the soft
 breeze 
 I lolled into the peacefulness 
 I kick back in my relaxing chair
 close my eyes , and dream.
 Aluminium Fairy's are dancing and laughing 
 on Green sleeves and Y shaped branches
 They STOP, Spin clockwise in the wind 
 holding on to the tip of failing dying leaf 


 I hear them say 

 ''WHO is she ?

Copyright © Carole Fairish | Year Posted 2014

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May 22, 2016 at 4:31 PM

carole fairish, well penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. *SKAT*"

June 11, 2014 at 6:14 AM

Dearest Carole, upon reading this most beautiful featured poem, I came to your page to hoping to read more of your writings.. Waiting with inticipation for your next Penn... Arlene...

June 11, 2014 at 3:41 PM

Thank you Arlene , I just can't decide what poem to post .. Your all such great writers hear at P.S , Thanks for such a lovely comment :)

Suzanne Delaney

June 9, 2014 at 8:25 PM

I love wind chimes and have quite a few in my garden......I say it is the fairies ringing them when I hear them....welcome to the soup. SuZ

June 11, 2014 at 3:37 PM

Hi Suzanne , I love wind chimes too Thanks for your comment :)

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 10:20 AM

You are welcome, thank you for the reply

June 9, 2014 at 8:19 AM

Wonderful imaginative piece. Congrats on the selection daver

June 9, 2014 at 10:04 AM

Thanks very much :)

Poet Destroyer A

June 9, 2014 at 7:47 AM

Carole, Congratulations on having your poem Featured on the Poetry Soups Home Page. Enjoy the coming week. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

June 9, 2014 at 10:06 AM

Thanks Linda I never expected it to go on the 'Home Page It' feels good :)

June 9, 2014 at 6:26 AM

I've enjoyed the "Wind Chime Tree, Carole ... and ... congratulations on it's being selected as a featured poem this week! Jack C.

June 9, 2014 at 10:07 AM

I'm pleased you enjoyed my Poem Jack thank you :)

June 9, 2014 at 6:18 AM

A piece of good poetry. Keep it up and congrats on your poem selected to be featured, carole

June 9, 2014 at 10:09 AM

Thank you so much that means a lot to me I can't stop smiling :) thank you Dr, Ram :)

June 6, 2014 at 9:14 PM

Nice work. I love windchimes.

June 7, 2014 at 12:47 AM

Thank you :)

Pandita Sietesantos

June 6, 2014 at 3:19 PM

Beautiful write - bravo. Kindest regards.

June 7, 2014 at 12:48 AM

Hi Thanks for commenting :)

May 30, 2014 at 12:36 PM

hi carole and welcome to poetrysoup!! I wish 'time well spend' for you on the site.....ty for commenting on my 'A father-The son' poem.....great descriptive context in your poem...kinda like standstill and observing everything.

June 7, 2014 at 12:51 AM

Hi Your welcome .. I enjoyed your poem :) Thanks for reading mine :)

May 18, 2014 at 12:53 AM

Who is she? :)

June 7, 2014 at 12:49 AM

:) Hello

May 16, 2014 at 5:04 PM

Hi Carole, hope to see a new one from you soon.......SKAT

June 9, 2014 at 10:13 AM

I'm going to post a Poem soon just a bit shy I think every one on Poetrysoup writes really well SO MMM .. I don't no what to post that's good enough :) Thanks :)

May 19, 2014 at 4:34 PM

Came back to see if you had another poem.. SAD FACE :(

May 15, 2014 at 9:18 PM

Carole This is so sweet and serene. Very peaceful and calm. You took the reader on a fantastic journey and adventure. Thank you for the nice comment on my Romance poem.

May 16, 2014 at 1:39 AM

Thank you for your kind comment ,I look forward to reading more of your Poetry .. I can learn from PS member's :)

May 15, 2014 at 8:38 PM

Carole welcome to PS, I myself am new at writing, Peter and some other P.Soupers have inspired me to try and I didn't think I could do it but here I am' really loved your poem, keep writing, lovely to have you as one of our friends.Take care.........Vera............

May 16, 2014 at 1:44 AM

Hi Vera I think we are taking a step forward in Poetry writing with all the lovely People on SP , Thank you my friend .. :)

May 15, 2014 at 5:29 PM

Loved the wind-chime tree! Yes, I said: Who is she? So I came over here and realized you're the new girl on the block:) Welcome; thanks for reading and commenting on my poem:) cu // paul

May 16, 2014 at 1:51 AM

Your welcome Paul , your Poetry is great and a inspiration to anyone who reads it . Thanks for reading my poem :)

May 15, 2014 at 8:46 AM

CAROLE, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

May 15, 2014 at 3:51 PM

'Thank you very much Skat :)

May 10, 2014 at 8:10 AM

Absolutely lovely descriptions. The wind chime tree seems so peaceful. Welcome to the soup

Poet Destroyer A

May 10, 2014 at 7:44 AM

Carole, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@

May 9, 2014 at 3:58 PM

Thank you for the welcome

Olatunji Samson

May 9, 2014 at 3:45 PM

Feel Good in seeing this....We can now be friend here.

May 9, 2014 at 3:59 PM

Hi thank you

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 9, 2014 at 3:15 PM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Carole :) - I choose your first well written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

May 9, 2014 at 4:00 PM

Thanks I'm not sure what to do yet just looking around and reading some poetry Thank you

May 9, 2014 at 12:01 PM

Hello, Carole. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I hope you find much encouragement here. Keep writing.

May 9, 2014 at 4:02 PM

Hi Faye , Looking forward to reading some of your Poetry Thanks for the welcome

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