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The Wind Storm With Rain

During the evening A strong wind blowing The trees were swaying Followed with the rain It lasted all night The strong wind blowing Into the morning Everywhere water Roads and streets flooded Ina watery mess All transportation Were not usable Instead row boats used To help the people That were stranded It was horrible The man hold lid flew Causing the bad flood In the wicked storm That got very bad The rain pouring Quickly to the ground The raindrops spread With the blowing wind Making the storm worse

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/15/2019 12:48:00 PM
Rain is blessing as well as curse if it falls excessively.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/15/2019 2:17:00 PM
Hello M. Asim Nehal,so nice to meet you. Yes rain is a blessing and a curse, if it falls excessively. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 3/13/2019 11:33:00 PM
Very vivid imagery; a rough storm! Flooding is not easy to recover from.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/14/2019 8:06:00 AM
Hello M.L. Kiser,thank you for your lovely comment. You are right flooding is not easy recover from in a rough storm. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 3/12/2019 9:23:00 AM
Good poem. Nice flow. Sad that things like this happen. I keep everyone in my prayers.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/12/2019 1:51:00 PM
Hello Bette thank you for the lovely comment. I did not mean for this poem to be sad. My muse made it sad. Have a nice day my friend.
Date: 3/11/2019 2:51:00 PM
A never ending rain...can cause a lot of pain...Well done Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/11/2019 5:13:00 PM
hello Arturo Michael, yes an never ending rain can cause pain. have a nice day my friend. Thank you for the lovely comment.

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